Progress
A note on wording: where the supplied copy had small spelling or grammar slips, we've tidied those as the changes went in — the meaning is unchanged.
Changes made
The clear-cut changes — now made and live on the preview, highlighted in yellow so you can see exactly what moved. Green rows with a ✓ done badge are complete; anything still outstanding is noted inline.
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A few of the notes need a quick decision from you before we can action them. Each one ends with the question we'd love your answer to.
One note asks to link “Donate” straight to JustGiving and remove the Donate page — another asks to put the fundraising progress chart on that same page. We can't do both, so we've paused here. The current Donate page is a full, designed page (intro, three cards and a call-to-action), so we didn't want to remove it without checking.
Could you confirm: keep the Donate page, or replace it with a direct link to JustGiving? And if we remove it, where would you like the progress chart to live instead — the home page or the partner page?
The notes suggest showing progress as money raised, schools reached and children helped — possibly along a map of the route. A couple of the figures don't quite reconcile yet (for example, at £1,500 per school, 50 schools comes to around £75,000 rather than the £80,000 target).
Could you confirm the final target figure, and whether you'd like the chart to show pounds, schools, children, or a mix? And is a route-map version wanted (a bigger piece of work) or a simpler progress bar?
The new copy states that over 20,000 children die each year from waterborne disease in Nepal. It's a powerful line — and because it's a strong public claim on a charity site, we'd like to attribute it to a credible source before it goes live.
Do you have a source for this figure (e.g. WHO, UNICEF or a government statistic) we can reference?
The notes ask to “remove” the price from each tier, while keeping the tier and adding a “Get in touch” button. We read that as: hide the displayed prices and turn the tiers into an enquiry-led layout rather than a price list — but we wanted to confirm before removing any pricing.
Shall we hide the prices on every tier and point each one to a “Get in touch” button?
A few of the new tier descriptions don't clearly line up with the five tiers (Full Throttle, Open Road, Trail Partner, Water4Schools, Mile Maker), so we want to place them exactly where you intend.
Could you give us a quick tier-by-tier list so each description lands on the right one?
The notes ask to add a WhatsApp link — there's already a WhatsApp button in the top navigation.
Is the existing one enough, or would you like it somewhere else too (e.g. the footer)?